Tuesday, May 04, 2010

http://www.troubadour21.com/series/clbledsoe/the-idealists-part-xii/

2 comments:

  1. My favorite line was/the girls started down graduation hill, barefoot in white dresses/. There is almost a poem lurking in that
    one sentence, that one image.
    Nice wrap-up for Derick & Ruthie;
    not quite, not totally a "happy
    ending", but hey, Ruth is pregnant,
    and their marriage might strengthen. It was a great foray
    into teaching, into marriage, into life. Thanks for it.

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  2. Thanks Glenn. I could've written a couple more, but I think it's done. I'm going to start another one, but I haven't totally decided what it will be...

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